The Greatest Empathy Experienced In My Life
Empathy is a connection a ladder that nurtures community wisdom. I go to school with friends prioritizes school, whenever you are making a leap of faith, obstacles dare you. All you need to do is to just handle otherwise, it prompts you to failure, so try your best in order to tackle any difficulty during journey. Often we see somebody exposes his material or spiritual goods in a way that we aren’t even aware of through empathy.
In our class we were rivals to hit the books, so I was going perfectly with my lessons. It seems my main teacher goes overboard about one of my classmates only being his father a popular Politian and well-known; therefore, she has become main teacher of us for 2 years she almost showed backlash against us and play down.
I got 2 days absent, next day she wants me to justify being absent for 2 days, I respond miss doesn’t believe it wants me to take mom to school, mom goes to teacher in front of everyone says:” why did you bring your mom I know you were sick, that’s ok.” Most of us stand teacher in this way.
I was in ninth grade our final exams reached so take it, before long result sheets were announced; although there were intelligent learners among all I was failed from 5 subjects. I am living worst feeling of my life. Remember nothing is in a vacuum. Later elaborated on issue my cousin he ends up taking 2 ardent workers of Maarif. She is not allowed to treat me in this way then I barely passed 3 exams and take 2 exams.
He literally tune himself into my feelings, deeply empathized with deal. If he hadn’t been there, I would not have passed the exams that easily. His effort was immediately hailed as a empathy. In winter going upstairs run into skeptical teacher and asks if I could have passed the exams I say surely I did it.
It turns out that empathy conducted as a controllable skill if we consider it will change into empathetic habbit.Then empathetic people; eventually, thanks to my cousin actions I went successful in my journey. Till we have empathetic folks we can live in unity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51466666667 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54325635532 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4554164722 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0555555556 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61111111111 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124569503874 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420520508774 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628554600504 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597292169868 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411554462171 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.