The ease of cooking has lots of advantages for improved life.in my opinion, cooking at home is a good way to save money and much healthier for family member.
in 2018, in an era of progress and technology, all utensil getting modern every month by update programs so, cooking much easier than 1000 years ago. In the past people should, preying on forest then, making fire was the hardest stuff that they have to do after that they didn’t have any fridge to freezing to storing without spoiled. but now, people use microwave to baking or heating foods.
Although, the first reason is, when mothers make food, whole of the family gathering together and talk about everything. Thus, all bad happening memory clear and all love capacity of family increase. I remember that, my brother in low had argued with me at work so, he got mad and he didn’t talk to me for a while. But in one dinner ceremony he reconciling with me. I’m really thankful to my mother in low. The second reason is, preparing your food at home can be especially beneficial if you or a family member has a food allergy. Because you are in control in your own kitchen, you can reduce the risk of an allergic reaction. Therefore, all these things show that welfare of cooking improved all structures of relationships and also, take care of member of family is the most important duty.
On the other hand, Research finds that people who eat home-cooked meals on a regular basis tend to be happier and healthier and consume less sugar and processed foods, which can result in higher energy levels and better mental health. Adults also reap considerable benefits from eating home-cooked meals.
In conclusion, the ideal would, of course, be nice. But not all people can do it, because, they are working hard 2 or 3 shifts on each duty and they don’t have enough time. But some new and modern stuffs help them too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...nd much healthier for family member. in 2018, in an era of progress and technol...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...to freezing to storing without spoiled. but now, people use microwave to baking or ...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: MOTHER-IN-LOW[2]
Message: Possible typos. This word is usually spelled with hyphens: 'brother-in-law'.
Suggestion: brother-in-law
...of family increase. I remember that, my brother in low had argued with me at work so, he got m...
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Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reconciles'.
Suggestion: reconciles
... a while. But in one dinner ceremony he reconciling with me. I'm really thankful to my...
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Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: MOTHER-IN-LOW[2]
Message: Possible typos. This word is usually spelled with hyphens: 'mother-in-law'.
Suggestion: mother-in-law
...with me. I'm really thankful to my mother in low. The second reason is, preparing your f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74174174174 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4414913063 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3488030001 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8823529412 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162843862661 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413055985883 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914204294468 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106966204654 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136317415335 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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