Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... reason: contacting everybody, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, telev...
^^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
... reason: contacting everybody, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, television help...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, television helps us contact wit...
^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ly, by watching television we can learn many knowledge. If you are a person who like...
^^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...ly, by watching television we can learn many knowledge. If you are a person who likes design, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ct, you can find the channel about them so as to study. On the other hand, you can watch...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... gain success, …. Moreover, we can know many information in the world through televi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
... gain success, …. Moreover, we can know many information in the world through television. We can...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'update the latest'.
Suggestion: update the latest
...in the world through television. We can update latest news through currents affairs program, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96296469607 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5915448499 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198033407601 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079603081115 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10719995284 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159998047835 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871723174895 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... reason: contacting everybody, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, telev...
^^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
... reason: contacting everybody, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, television help...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy, learning many knowledge, information Firstly, television helps us contact wit...
^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ly, by watching television we can learn many knowledge. If you are a person who like...
^^^^
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much knowledge', 'a good deal of knowledge'.
Suggestion: much knowledge; a good deal of knowledge
...ly, by watching television we can learn many knowledge. If you are a person who likes design, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ct, you can find the channel about them so as to study. On the other hand, you can watch...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... gain success, …. Moreover, we can know many information in the world through televi...
^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
... gain success, …. Moreover, we can know many information in the world through television. We can...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'update the latest'.
Suggestion: update the latest
...in the world through television. We can update latest news through currents affairs program, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96296469607 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5915448499 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198033407601 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079603081115 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10719995284 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159998047835 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871723174895 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.