history
Why would it be of humans not knowing anything about history? History is meant to be written for many purposes, it is meant to be written for not falling in the same mistakes all over again and ultimately to do better than in the past if possible. I totally agree that all university students should be required to take history classes no matter their field of study.
I believe that history is a reminder of the past, a reminder that invites us to learn. As humans, we have evolved throughout years and years of existence and so our practices have developed massively. However, we as students can have a better understanding on things when we study history. Mainly because it is the essential background to go further on research, for example on research, create theories, etc.
No matter the field of study that you have chosen, there is always a historical perspective. Take maths as an example; it is a science that was not created yesterday, but thousands of years ago with the firsts civilizations in very rudimentary ways to become what it is nowadays.
In history, you can find so much inspiration, there have been many role models in any fields that can serve as a motivation for us to reflect on so many aspects.
It is often said that the people who do not know their history, are condemned to repeat it somehow. Nowadays our politicians have wide ranges regarding study fields. Some are economists, other artists, other engineers. So what better than for the potential future leaders of this generation, to understand and have very strong foundations of history, in order to be able to analyze certain situations.
I am of the conviction that history is extremely interesting, useful, and can be a great resource in our everyday life. As simple as to understand current conflicts. I believe there is always a benefit of learning history, not only does warn us to repeat mistakes but so does bring us new ideas. People hardly consider how important history is: however I do see it as the most relevant part to start with any studies.
- in the reading passage In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about pa 83
- Humpback whales 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a great resource in our everyday life. As simple as to understand current conflic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78651685393 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74481756805 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0387422369 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186810999052 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653497911025 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955155108946 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089703630238 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102329413097 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.