How do movies and television influence people’s behavior. Do you agree that television has destroyed communication between friends and family. Explain your opinion with strong examples.
In the 21st century, television shows and movie productions have increased in drastic numbers with the advent of developing technology. And so does the concern of reduction in communication amongst people due to excessive devotion of time to media becomes a topic of issue. However, I personally feel that movies and television can also influence peoples’ behavior positively and can prove to be a very strong medium for sending out messages. I feel this way for two reasons and the coming paragraphs will explain them.
Firstly, movies and television shows send out the message of moral values and principles that each individual must possess, mainly children. It is important that the society must be aware of all the negativity that curb the development and must take the necessary steps to overcome these. For instance, bullying has been an increasing issue in all schools and colleges. In such cases, movies and television shows can preach a strong message against this and can motivate the victims to fight against the wrong doing. Without these, there have been several cases of victims suppressing themselves and with the help of these media, we can evidently bring about a change in the behavior of people. In such and many other similar cases, many social messages and awareness can be brought to the notice of people with the help of television shows and movies.
Secondly, even if people spend a lot of time watching shows and movies, I believe that these topics also prove to be a subject of communication. There are exchange of personal views and opinions on a subject matter and people are aware of the various political matters around us. To state an instance, watching world news is an effective medium of obtaining information around the globe and certainly is a prime topic of discussion and expression of viewpoints amongst people. Possessing general awareness is of prime essentiality to the citizens and is definitely a very productive and fruitful topic of communication. This also brings about liberalism and a sense of awareness among the people through these media.
However, anything in excess may have negative effects and hence proper measures of using these media for the development must be taken. Therefore in conclusion, I fee that in spite of the negatives that are involved in watching these shows and movies, there are many other positive effects of it that can be effectively utilized by the people to bring about a change in this constant challenging world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0799031477 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76129925072 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496368038741 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7351220595 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.411764706 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143501563594 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483190937416 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506163117712 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928087363279 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757353442164 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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