As far as I concern, People have been debating about the pros and cons of the watching television or movies. Both have it's own perspectives depends on how you take it positively or negatively. Television is a broad entertaining media. Anyone can learn good things by watching different kind of knowledgeable shows or movies. From my personal vies point, I strongly believe that watching good movies put positive influence on people's behavior. My two rationales are as follows.
To begin with, people can explore the whole new world watching the television. Some television channels like national geographic gives an information about the al different kind of culture, regions, countries and detailed history of animals life. I will illustrate my own personal experience to illustrate this. When I was a kid, My father used to watch discovery channel all the time. He explained me about the different geography and culture through the shows, also helped me to learn about that animal's natural habitat. At that time, Our financial condition was not strong enough, that my dad can take me to those real places to improve my general knowledge. So, I think that TV show helped to cover up my deficiency which helped me in the future to build up my carrier as a forest officer.
The another point is, Some movies can teach you a good lessons for a life. Now days, Directors make movies on the real life incidents and give a lesson to young generations about how to avoid the alcohol, smoking and drugs which has negative impact on the life. For example, Recently, I watched Movie "Fashion" in which one young girl wanted to become a successful model, that girl was from the middle class family. So, her aim was to become popular and famous. She tried all the wrong ways to get success. She got so much drug addictive and lost all her social connections with family and friends and at the end, She lost all fame and success because of negative behavior which ruin her life. I have learned a lesson from the film is that work hard to get success, but do not use the wrong path.
Some people might asset that watching Television and movies can negatively impact the people's behavior which is true too. Again as my view, It completely depends on what kind of shows or movie you watch. According to survey released by the federal research center, more than two third of people consider positive effect of watching television.
All in all, I consider the watching television will give you an opportunity to explore the new world as well anyone ca learn good lesson. In general, I wholeheartedly believe that the very first thing we should do now is to admit the positive importance of watching broadcast media as the key to open the door of our bleak future.
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- TPO43Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?•Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.•Wait until the class or me 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third, well, as to, for example, i think, in general, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80543933054 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64311398538 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0171713313 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.88 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.12 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222809675242 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560683862386 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069130639486 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126563526557 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754261349901 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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