TV and movies considers of the most important media and that cause to the big influence in our live, there are many advantage and dis advantage for this kind of media however advertisement and fashion also in violence and many thing more.
Initially, TV and movies nowadays play a significant role in our live, it is one of the best way to get the information that we need in many parts in our lives, for instance, most people get influence after watching TV or movies in many parts like fashion. People attend to imitation the famous actors and singers in how they dress and how they talk and even in things like how they walk or how they do their hire cut. Kids also get influence in the characteristic of the movies however, kids always in particular in age of 3 tell 15 looks for the role modal who inspire them and trying to imitation and each kids choose the character which it close to him. Moreover, advertisement play a fundamental role in TV and movies and many companies pay a big amount for the productive to show their products in the movies or in the TV, for instances productive show the actors dressing clothes that have brand or drinking a product for a company and that will late the people buy this product by name of fashion. Also, companies using the TV to make studies on the marketing for future product by making survey about the botanical products.
Moreover, TV and movies sometimes used either in reduce violence or increase the violence depends in the way or the power that stand behind the TV channel or the movie to illustrate in the U,S there are two channels like CNN and Fox each one of them belong to different party and each party use his channel to support his ideas and his principles for examples, CNN belong to the democratic party that have opposed policy and have support the immigration in the other hand there is the Fox channel that support the president and have been supported the decision against the immigration.
In the third place, TV and movies have a positive influence in many aspects however, there are many education movies that helped student to get the knowledge and to improve the capacity of education. Many documentary movies inspire young people in their life. for instance, many people have seen movies in TV channels like national graphic that show them the profession they interested in. Also, TV and movies considered one of the best wise to exchange the idea and to show the culture for each countries, in many times TV and movies used to show many religion pogroms.
In conclusion, TV and movies have a big effect in our live and there are many pros and cons on our behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...he big influence in our live, there are many advantage and dis advantage for this kind of medi...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...also in violence and many thing more. Initially, TV and movies nowadays play a...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closes'?
Suggestion: closes
...each kids choose the character which it close to him. Moreover, advertisement play a ...
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Line 3, column 898, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'branded'.
Suggestion: branded
...w the actors dressing clothes that have brand or drinking a product for a company and...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , S
...nnel or the movie to illustrate in the U,S there are two channels like CNN and Fox...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ies inspire young people in their life. for instance, many people have seen movies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 13.8261648746 253% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47961290168 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423728813559 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.978982257 48.9658058833 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.916666667 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.3333333333 20.6045352989 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156936301072 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702031951946 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331981251562 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889597312513 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281083388571 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 11.7677419355 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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