How do movies or television influence people s behavior Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer

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How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Movies and television are one of the most popular forms of entertainment for people. Most of the population like to watch movies or television series in their free time. These influence people’s behavior in positive ways such as addition of something good as well as in negative ways such as asocial or offensive acts. There are several reasons behind how movies and television influence people’s behavior.

First, everyone has their own choice of movies or television shows which they watch in leisure time. The choices are made on the basis of a person's psychological needs, so people unconsciously try to fulfill their desires from movies or television series. These desires may be socially acceptable or may be socially rejected. For example, I am trying to achieve a high score but I lost three times and to overcome my feeling of depression I watch actual life based motivational movies to boost my will.

Second, movies and television programs present a story in an exaggerated way. The whole content is not true but people take it as a real event and try to experience it and major accidents happen. For instance, when I was in high school my friend watched a movie similar to a fictitious hero. He went to the roof of school to propose to a girl and he slipped because of water and got multiple fractures. This is a suitable example here which I had seen.

Third, some movies and series create suspense and hold attention for a long time. People start watching a television series and binge all episode in a day. After spending six to seven hours in front of the screen some people unconsciously or sometimes consciously start to imitate their favorite character of that series. In this way people’s inner personality as well as appearance is influenced by movies and television programs.

Finally, these are a few reasons and examples which show that people’s lives are affected by movies and television. There are so many live examples supporting my idea, even we can also analyse ourselves and find the effect of fictitious characters is present.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...e. The choices are made on the basis of a persons psychological needs, so people unconsci...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an exaggerated way" with adverb for "exaggerated"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and television programs present a story in an exaggerated way. The whole content is not true but peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77596241814 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562857142857 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.650610672 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287871120321 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960661371332 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100468254982 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161805778102 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745221066544 0.0645574589148 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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