how to spend the money allocated by government?
How can money help a country? As far as we know, money is the most significant part of our life. According to the researches that published about money shows that the only way to improve a country is money because, it uses for different parts such economic, culture also in different necessary and harmful parts for needy families and children instead of debunking parts. Unfortunately these days money is a really huge obstacle for our country and we must spend it very carefully with plans to solve all problems. It’s the government duty to manage the money and divide it.
How the government must use the money?
Which part of country needs money?
We know that there all more parts in our country which need money but, it turns out that we must spend the money for significant parts. In my view (street and homeless families) (hospitals) are the most erosion parts.
According to New York magazine quests the income of families in Afghanistan is under (2$) every day. That means they are not able to have healthy food, well dress, in this manner government have to spot a huge amount of money for this part to decrease the poverty and present abundant helps.
Secondly: hospitals are the most valuable parts in a country specially in (Afghanistan) because of civil wars. There are so many reasons which shows that people are in need for hospitals, for this reason we must use a really huge amount of money for medicans and hospital equipments for having high qualities. That would not be a really huge obstacle if government money for this part.
To conclude having skilled managers for money is really significant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...of debunking parts. Unfortunately these days money is a really huge obstacle for our...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...ome of families in Afghanistan is under 2$ every day. That means they are not able...
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Line 8, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mount of money for medicans and hospital equipments for having high qualities. Th...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...managers for money is really significant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80357142857 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43190684821 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503571428571 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7339894981 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252654896381 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123444102316 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110974333345 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169382911702 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1208132531 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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