humans, human nature, actions and consequences, enviornment, enviornmental issues, actions today and consequences tomorrow,
I believe that our current way of life will definitely have a negative impact on future generations for 3 reasons.
Firstly, it is doing a lot of harm to our planet. examples of this include global warming, desertification, etc. These epidemics are directly caused by the way we currently live our lives. For instance, if 1 out of 2 people currently owns a car, and drives it regularly, that alone causes irreversible damage to the ozone layer, causing the global warming epidemic.
The desertification epidemic is effecting how much farmable land we have on earth, directly resulting in fewer crops being grown, making vegetables more expensive, making it more difficult to maintain a healthy diet. This is a dangerous slope to go down on because it will result in humans getting unhealthy, mostly through obesity, which results in more diseases (both mental and physical).
Secondly, the capitalist mindset is resulting in the extinction of some animals through illegal hunting. This is especially dangerous considering that life on earth is based on a very delicate eco-system that would, rather quickly, crumble with the extinction of any of the major pillars it is made up of.
Lastly, the industrialization of certain markets is causing major problems in the genetic pools of some plants and animals. One can see note this phenomenon in the existence of "genetic engineering".
The existence of such a field that is focused on studying genetic manufacturing and twisting is mostly used in the food industry. Cows in farms, for example, would be injected with unhealthy hormones to make them produce more milk in order to fulfill the demand in the market. This causes the cows' genes to have mutations, resulting in unhealthier cows when bred.
In conclusion, The harm being caused by the lifestyle choices that we make is resulting in a worse life for our children and grandchildren, and ultimately fewer choices and freedom for them. Whether it is through global warming, desertification, illegal hunting, or clusterization, these choices that we make have negative consequences on our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26099706745 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0999023346 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0148415473 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0115484379831 0.236089414692 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00367140369296 0.076458572812 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00974678156128 0.0737576698707 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00492011644259 0.150856017488 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0077881995706 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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