If food tastes good, it's probably bad for you”. How far do you agree with this statement? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Lately, we are overwhelmed with numerous products in supermarkets from healthy and not tasty to deliciously harm to our bodies. Despite the huge variation of food the majority of the people are inclined to eat foods that solely tastes good. However, it doesn't mean that those food products are healthy, nutritious or rich of sufficient amount of proteins, carbohydrates and fiber. I stand of the opinion that if food tastes good it is not healthy or can cause harm to your body and I will provide some supporting explanation in the following essay.
First of all, many people adhere to normal eating habits and don't pay so much attention of what they consume in a regular basis. In fact, the most important to them is just to feel pleasure from eating food and being satisfied by their favorite products. Accordingly, by following the same pattern in the time, those people might end up with severe illnesses like hearth diseases, high blood pressure, diabetes, obesity etc. Therefore, it is crucial to be responsible for ourselves and take up exercises at least 3 times per week along with balanced diet. Not by chance many nutritionists create food program to their patients which is rich on vitamins, minerals and more protein. For those who can afford it is preferable to eat organic bio products harvested from a near farm. In contrast, they should stave off genetically modified products and fast foods such as burgers, pizzas and so on. Regardless of their amazing taste, they can increase the bad cholesterol or cause overweight. In most of the cases food with good taste is bad for the human body because of the compounds and it can bring about listeria or salmonella when eating, like some chicken products.
Secondly, well developed marketing in some leading food companies or chains tempt people to buy their products as they don't realize consequences. For example, renown companies like McDonalds implement many advertising strategies in order to sell their products to customers. Especially kids are inveigled by fancy billboards, brochures and many other sources. It is scientifically proved that high rate of the teenagers afflict form diseases by consuming junk food regularly. If their parents don't take any actions, this would lead to severe health problems. For example, when I was a kid I didn't like to eat carrots, however my mom was giving me every time when she made a salad. I can't deny that I preferred a small chocolate, but she kept teaching me to eat healthy and I am so glad I could follow the pattern until now.
In conclusion, it is regarded that many good tasty food can cause harm to people's bodies due to the strongly and unceasingly marketing influence form companies' side and people's nonchalance. Careless of food consumption is commonly practice nowadays and is very dangerous as we take in account all ramifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95625 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75812483477 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8847984298 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.136363636 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14547711565 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423218698848 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445428185284 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928685851045 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480298850471 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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