The world has changed over the last few years and most of the people start to consider saving our earth through campaigns, recycling and using local organic food. Personally, I think the best way for contribution is to recycle waste. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
If people start to recycle their waste, the companies would stop producing more plastic. This will save our environment from pollution. A good example is my home town AlAhsa, Saudi Arabia. Five years ago, the mayor started to force all grocery stores to use only recycle bags and adds a small fee for them. The people started to think about it and they started to recycle. As a result, some companies stop producing and selling plastic. Now, you can refresh your lungs by taking a deep breath in my town. You can feel it.
Moreover, recycling waste will contribute to society by increasing awareness. If parents start to recycle, the children will learn from them and they will recycle in the future. Also, the community will encourage each other to recycle. For instance, again my town also started to provide special containers for recycling. At first, they were empty and no one uses it. Last year, there was a huge campaign for recycling. Schools start to invite parents and teach them about the advantage of recycling. The celebrities start to publish videos and photos on Instagram and snapchat. As a result, now you can see the difference if you walk through the neighbors.
Frankly speaking, a lot of people want to contribute to their society and help the environment but they need encouragement. Buying organic food, or riding a bicycle will benefit society but not every day. For instance, after every campaign, the social media and newspaper will start to talk about it and after a few days, it will be forgotten. On the other hand, recycling will be on daily basis which will really help the society in the future.
All in all, the best way to contribute to society is by recycling. I think that because it will save our environment and it will increase the awareness forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80547945205 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50877835802 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3809394076 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4615384615 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0384615385 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57692307692 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18591513169 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513794323556 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683117613513 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121419616961 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866457450779 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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