If you are going to graduate from the university and have to choose the final course, which professor will you choose? The one whose course you used to sign up for or the one you have never learned from before?
I believe most students have faced this problem while they are choosing courses. Many people suppose that they are more likely to choose the new professor. However, I am totally disagree with this statement. From my perspective, I would like to choose the course that I have taken before.
First, it can help to save a lot of time. Graduates will be quite busy during the graduation season. We will be occupied with plenty of things such as taking photos with classmates and teachers, arrange files and so on. Fortunately, we know the class well, we can prepare some documents before the class and so that we could not spend extra time to adapt the way and accent that professor talked. In this way, we save lots of time to do other things like writing thesis and doing internships.
Second, it is conducive to my score. For example, many professors prefer one final exam for the whole course, while other professors like to evaluate students with class attending performance, mid-term exam and final exam. As I know the demand of the professor clearly, I believe that I could a good job at the end of the semester. One of my best friends ,Jack who knows professor’s paper demand very well. Therefore, he finished the task perfectly with a extraordinary score. There is no doubt that higher grade is very attractive every student.
Last but not the least, it is very convenient for me to ask some questions to professors. As I am very familiar with my professor, we can have a nice conversation and I am pretty sure that he is willing to help me when I am in trouble. I could enquire him some practical job interview strategies which is good for my internship. In this severely competitive society, being good is not always enough, being different can easily catch the eye of those important leaders and I can be distinguished from others quickly.
Clearly, as three advantages mentioned above, time-saving, high grade and being helpful can strongly reach to the conclusion that it is better to choose the course that I have signed up for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73949579832 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71133411625 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557422969188 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2782559751 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174950191187 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049526227808 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530744226435 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104591053766 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045169861148 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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