If you want to choose a purpose, which one do you choose?
1- Helping other people
2- Enhancing time management
3-Improving physical well-being and eating healthy food
In our sophisticated era, having a purpose in each individual's life leads them to being hopeful. Which kind of goals that people choose, have drastic relationship with the humans conditions. At my today condition, I personally prefer to concentrate on improvement of my physical condition and care about my daily diet. In the following paragraphs the most outstanding reasons for my point of view will be explained.
First remarkable thing that substantiated my standpoint is, if I want to be an effective person for society, First of all, I should be healthy. Having healthier lifestyle provides people with the opportunity to be more confident and motivation. It also Increase their energy in their routine life. To bring into more vivid picture, my personal experience would be a great example. I have started to work out for three years which has fantastic influence in my life for this past three years. During this time my self-confidence is surprisingly increased and it lead me to making best decisions in my life. Indeed, I feel younger and it brings me to act as an experienced one meanwhile looked at my early twenties. It also has been proven by scientist that Physical activities release serotonin in body which keeps human looked younger. It would be more effaceable when both healthy regimen and exercising correlating with to gather. Since, I tend to be an effective person, preference of healthy lifestyle is logical goal.
Another worthy point to be mentioned here is that healthy diet and physical well-being helps to less pollution released into the environment. Although the sound of these Idea is wired, it would be need deep thinking to illustrate. To shed the light on this point, healthy diets like Vegans leads most of harmful human activities reduce and they also act as e environmental friendly. For example, Vegans do not eat meet at all and this approach decrease the need for livestock which is the most effective one in the global warming. On the other hand, working out make people relaxed and calm. This helps people to avoid social anxiety to control the criminal behavior in society. For example, when I do exercise I feel energized and I do not want to ruin my motivation by yelling at a person who has miserable driving in the road.
To take all the aforementioned into conclusion, by choosing improvement of physical well-being not only I can motivate myself, but also I can make a great chance to keep environment clean. I also find out that this choice cover other options, too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: Increases
... more confident and motivation. It also Increase their energy in their routine life. To ...
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...idence is surprisingly increased and it lead me to making best decisions in my life....
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Message: Did you mean 'this Idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this Idea; these ideas
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t this choice cover other options, too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, while, for example, i feel, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94600938967 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85544927418 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9595616356 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6086956522 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211005547443 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569407235575 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363191157874 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130193262345 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361221680626 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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