If you want to choose a purpose, which one do you choose?
Helping other people
Enhancing time management
Improving physical well-being and eating healthy food
It goes without saying that there are both positive and negative aspects of having each of the upper mentioned aims. In this line of thought, there has always been a controversial question, whether it is more reasonable to put managing the time, helping other people or physical situation as a priority in our lives. Some people believe that we are born to help each other, while others hold different opinions, stating that personal life matters like time, and our body's physical status is more important. But if I have to choose between these three options, I would concur with the first approach to my life, on which I will elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that providing aid and support for other people has a social impact, so this aim's sub results are more likely to be satisfying. In other words, by doing philanthropic tasks, we can impact our world, and consequently, we have an indirect influence on our personal life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I can remember when I was exhausted and tired of my city's environment, accidentally I came up with an announcement that asked for volunteers to clean the town. Honestly, I was so reluctant at first saying, that why should I clean the city as I am paying taxes? But when I registered at the group and participated in the program, not only was the neighborhood cleaner than ever, but also I felt fantastic! Because I have a ting role in helping myself to feel better in that atmosphere.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my Stance is that the help comes back to you when you need it. In fact, there is a butterfly effect saying that every single act in our life returns to us. It acts like that we need it. Drawing from my experience, I used to help my friend solve complex math questions during high school. Years later, when I had to pass statics, which was my blind spot at college, One of my classmates helped me for hours to overcome my obstacle. It is undoubtedly clear that the more you assist others, The more you get help when you are in need.
To sum up, Taking all the aforementioned reasons and points into account, One can undoubtedly conclude is that setting helping people as a life-time goal is a long term guarantee. This is because, in this way, not only do we influence the universe, but also it comes back to you when you need it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...his aims sub results are more likely to be satisfying. In other words, by doing philanthropic...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r than ever, but also I felt fantastic! Because I have a ting role in helping myself to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou when you need it. In fact, there is a butterfly effect saying that every singl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it comes back to you when you need it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, honestly, if, so, while, in fact, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63615560641 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69071939922 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551487414188 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0033882273 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213814199759 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062453275274 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597272102378 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135051636292 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463497562422 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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