If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
• Find a roommate to share a room
• Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less Frequently
• Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
Today, the cost of living in my country is an issue for almost everyone, since having a vocation is indispensable for every members of a family. Besides, some people find the solution in reducing the living expenses in different ways. In my opinion to reduce living expenses is rational and a good way to do so is to find a roommate, since it fulfills many different demands which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First and most effective reason is by having a roommate we share the cost of living place instead of paying totally. Although by sharing we might gain less privacy, it causes to get rid of anxiety from living expenses. In addition, when one shares his place with a roommate, there will be a possibility to share foods indeed leads to live more economical because the roommates may buy foods in wholesale which will be cheaper. I remember one of our neighbors bought the apartment where she rented with her roommates for several years. She told me had not she shared the living expenses with her roommates, she wouldn’t be able to buy the apartment.
The second reason which worth some words here is having roommate is a great opportunity to share the stuff, get some friendly consult, or study together. For example my roommate and I study together when it’s close to the time of our university exams. Once she told me for her to study with me is a giant help to save money. Because if I weren’t her roommate, she had to pay someone else to teach her the lessons. It’s obvious the more she had to practice her lessons, the more she had to pay money.
In short, having roommate is so handy, since it is a great help to lower the living expenses. In addition by sharing the stuff and having roommate we will live more economical and it refuses to waste extra money.
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- If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?• Find a roommate to share a room• Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less Frequently• Buy cheap foo 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s to find a roommate, since it fulfills many different demands which I will elaborate in the f...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...g we might gain less privacy, it causes to get rid of anxiety from living expenses. In...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...t help to lower the living expenses. In addition by sharing the stuff and having roommat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, second, so, for example, in addition, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62848297214 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56523547713 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489164086687 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2143341559 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203894776206 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713107960724 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049574298607 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126160262436 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559295623422 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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