If you were the leader of the country, what kind of policy would you use to succeed?
1. Creating job for unemployed people
2. Develop agriculture and reduce food prices
3. Develop Housing
Since the dawn of civilization and industrialization, the ever-increasing role of policies of leadership that are taken place has been undeniable. Beyond any doubt, gaining higher life qualities is just one of the desirable results of taking appropriate policies in leading a society. numerous contributing factors that can lead a society to succeed have been assessed for decades. The unavoidable question that always has been the topic of controversy and brought about debates is whether it is better to invest in creating more job opportunities or develop other basic needs conditions such as housing or agriculture and food prices.
I personally believe that the availability of job opportunities is a key factor in every society in order to succeed. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
The first remarkable aspect to point out is that creating job opportunities needs a wide variety of infrastructures which all can result in a sustainable society. No one can cast doubt on the inevitability of different kinds of problems that every country has to deal with. Therefore, the more impenetrable to any kind of issue a country is, the more successful it can be considered. Obviously, a country that has a supporting structure to provide all the members of the society with all types of vocations is financially sustainable due to the balance in different parts of the economy in which every part is able to consolidate the other part's absence or shortage in case of need. Consequently, such a firm society can withstand lots of barriers and is finally successful. Recent studies conducted in my country indicate that more financially sustainable societies are the ones with a higher ratio of job opportunities. All in all, the interdependency of the job creation and indispensable infrastructures can make job creation a beneficial opportunity to fortify the society implicitly.
Furthermore, one should take into account the fact that the availability of more vocations in a country lets people have their dream jobs, so, the average rate of happiness and life satisfaction is considerably higher in that society. Basically, one's happiness and feelings of life has a great part in the definition of success. For the matter of illustration, there was a time when I was literally depressed due to a problem associated with an educational position that I had not been able to achieve and I felt neither happiness nor life satisfaction in that period of time. Eventually, I came to the point that I thought I was not successful and I was not going to be. Had I achieved that position, my life would have been replete with happiness and therefore, I would have definitely felt that I was successful.
In conclusion, I believe that creating more jobs for the unemployed is by far the most effective way to lead a society to success. So it is highly recommended that all leaders especially leaders of the countries pay more attention to invest in high potential activities such as job creation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2540.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10040160643 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24580054934 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4859437751 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7093691287 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128980973004 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390375863802 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390201610002 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811428187566 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451839335391 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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