If I go to trip and there will be one additional thing, which I take, of course it would be my smart phone. They have become essential part of our life. We shape our life and make it easy by the help of smart phones
First, they help us to find a place which we want to go. When you plan to go somewhere or lost your way, you can use it; therefore, It is good to have it to find your way. Take my own example, I have visited Paris several times. Every time I tried to go somewhere, I discovered different places by the help of my smart phone. Moreover, these journeys increased my knowledge about Paris streets and avenues.
Secondly, communication has always played significant role in each person’s life. It is also vital for me to communicate with my family while I am away from my house. I can call my family or text them and share my experiences, if I have smartphone during my holiday. That is, they make our life more comfortable.
Thirdly, in addition to the importance of communication and navigation, there is another subtle point. Sharing pictures on social media platforms is so popular among the Young. You can share your pictures on social media namely Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. It helps to manage your accounts.
To sum up, taking all aforementioned reasons in to the account, one cannot deny the important of smart phone in our life. Not only on a holiday but also on our daily routine, life can be boring without it. They make us happy and help us when we really need a help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make it easy by the help of smart phones First, they help us to find a place whic...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...e help of smart phones First, they help us to find a place which we want to go. When you p...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e our life more comfortable. Thirdly, in addition to the importance of communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49637681159 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61125830248 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2716694803 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.9444444444 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200976398972 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584399039016 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073301822977 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104726281769 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334109924274 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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