Both article and lecture speaks about Endmonstosaurus. The reading states that they migrate to warmer area in the summer and provide several reasons. However, the lecture find it unconvincing and contradicts reading. She refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the article claims that these animal's eating behaviors support migration thesis. These animals migrate to the more warm area to find food in winter since they consume mainly plants. The lecture refutes this point and says summer was warmer today and sun product more light for the plant to grown. She states that there were plent of food even in winter times.
Secondly, the article posits that Like modern animals such as bufallo and caribou, these animals lived in herd due to skeletons relic that is un earthed from same site. Animals that lives in a herd help to navigate each other to migrate. these points also support migration thesis. However, the professor says that living in a herd provide extra protection for preditors. not to migrate.According to the proferssor there are a plant eater which lives in herd in the usa but they do not migrate in winters.
Lastly, ther reading say that these animals capable to migrate long distance. They need to move 5 km per hours for several weeks. They can move 45 km per hours. The Lecturer opposes this point and says they have juveniles and these juveniles are not ready physically. Adult animals in herd does not left them. We also learn that they do not migrate and they survive in winter times
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...help to navigate each other to migrate. these points also support migration thesis. H...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...provide extra protection for preditors. not to migrate.According to the proferssor ...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...rotection for preditors. not to migrate.According to the proferssor there are a plant eat...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'eaters'?
Suggestion: eaters
...ing to the proferssor there are a plant eater which lives in herd in the usa but they...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are not ready physically. Adult animals in herd does not left them. We also lear...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...ically. Adult animals in herd does not left them. We also learn that they do not mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91828793774 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38898464823 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533073929961 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4786256001 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5263157895 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5263157895 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269679061306 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856011699459 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044406427014 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163093517132 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545147299234 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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