Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighborhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples
In this fast growing world, industrialization and technological advancements have taken a major role. Considering build a large factory plays a significant role in our neighborhood so, everyone will get the chance to work with it. As far as I concerned, I strongly support the idea about building a new factory in my region due to two main reasons I will explain in this essay.
First, people today facing a hug problem of finding jobs in their neighborhood and the decision taken by the government to build a large factory will make a hug changes. Unfortunately, the poverty ratio increased and families barely have time to find further jobs nearby. My husband as a mechanical engineer faced this dilemma few years ago, when he was looking for a job in the same neighborhood he was living at. For that reason he moved to another state just to find a nearby opportunity as an engineer. But, if this decision had been taken two years ago, he never will change his place, it was better for him to help funding to this factory. Furthermore, building a large factory will assist people who seeking jobs to find a near one without being worry about the traffic and the air pollution.
Second, less traffic-accident because no need to use cars to go to their far jobs every single day is another advantage from this project with less air pollutions can change the main understanding of the air pollutions happening as a result of factories being build. To help cut the air pollution, managers and workers can invest their time and energy to use modern technologies and inventions of using filters for instance. When my husband found a job as an engineer, he assisted the factory’s manager to cut the air-pollution by 40 percent due to the effect of filtration system had been created in the neighborhood to filter the organic chemicals which came out from the factories as a product. As a result, new invention was eco-friendly and no impact on the environment happened.
To put it in a brief, I strongly agree with the government to build large industry in my neighborhood because this project will help individuals to find a job nearby to improve their economical-status and no need to use cars as a transportation and that will reduce the air pollution ratio which can happen due to usage of cars every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'builds'.
Suggestion: builds
...ts have taken a major role. Considering build a large factory plays a significant rol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sons I will explain in this essay. First, people today facing a hug problem...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'change'.
Suggestion: will never change
...cision had been taken two years ago, he never will change his place, it was better for him to hel...
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Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
...g jobs to find a near one without being worry about the traffic and the air pollution...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he traffic and the air pollution. Second, less traffic-accident because no...
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...he factories as a product. As a result, new invention was eco-friendly and no impact on the e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpact on the environment happened. To put it in a brief, I strongly agree w...
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Suggestion:
... happen due to usage of cars every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07678403532 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5075 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.275270768 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153451731592 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059247723317 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329556510697 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103593438266 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315244464333 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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