To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries for the universities
It is undoubtedly true that education plays a pivotal role in everyone's life.I personally believe that to take education to the next nevel the universities should increase the lecturers salaries. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with,increment in professor salaries brings about motivation, which automatically results in putting all efforts towards disseminating the right information to students.To be more specific, students trained by such professors will always have an exceptional education, because all the academic resources will be available at all time.Therefore they won't be limited.My personal experience is an intelligent illustration of this.When I was in high school I was so curious on how my school keeps producing brilliant brains despite the fact that it's a government owned.In fact, a recent competition held among the south west school in the United states, we came first, and this actually made my school to be well known.From my findings all i could deduce was that the each professors receive fat salary and with this, they feel much elated to train students to be faultless in academic activities.
Furthermore, when professors receive high salaries,research will be improved, which will result in discovery of things that would be applicable for human use.For instance,my husband is a PhD student at the University of Idaho, his focus majorly is the use of semiconductor in power electronics.In fact, he has won so many prizes at the middle stage of his research, because his professor is receiving grant from the university, and this has force him to create more time to do a lot of findings towards the research.Also, before the year runs out his publication on semiconductor would be available on the website of American international physicist journals.If the professor has not been funded by the universities, my hubbys research wouldn't have hit the ground.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that in order to provide the best education, professors' salaries need to be increased. This is because it encourages them to give an exemplary education, and because it improves more scientific discovery
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, i feel, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30857142857 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21370026414 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588571428571 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 336.180507069 48.9658058833 687% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.666666667 100.406767564 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.3333333333 20.6045352989 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 5.45110844103 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103533103104 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665788857061 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597423451281 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809167319509 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652410306617 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 11.7677419355 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 58.1214874552 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 10.002688172 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.247311828 224% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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