Independent TOEFL essay - TPO 1: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hsdcvsmdpvm
hsdcvsmdpvm sdvspdvmspd aasd vsfdvjsv dijf
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
hsdcvsmdpvm sdvspdvmspd aasd vsfdvjsv dijf
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 43.0788530466 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 52.1666666667 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 40.0 1977.66487455 2% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 5.0 407.700716846 1% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.0 4.8611393121 165% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.49534878122 4.48103885553 33% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 3.13687742827 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 5.0 212.727598566 2% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.524837075471 191% => OK
syllable_count: 1.8 618.680645161 0% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 0.4 1.51630824373 26% => Avg_syllables_per_word is low.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 5.0 20.1344086022 25% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.0 100.406767564 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 5.0 20.6045352989 24% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.45110844103 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 11.7677419355 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 167.92 58.1214874552 289% => Flesch_reading_ease is high.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: -8.9 10.1575268817 -88% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 24.68 10.9000537634 226% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 0.25 8.01818996416 3% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 0.0 86.8835125448 0% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 1.5 10.002688172 15% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.0 10.0537634409 40% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 0.0 10.247311828 0% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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