The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
over the past few decades, The internet has, indeed, changed the world. Overall speaking, I would say that these changes are quite positive. because technology have dramatically developed , now we can learn something new wherever you are and make friends from all over the world.
To begin with, I am a student. To satisfy my curiosity, sometimes The internet would become my teacher. I can post questions on The internet so that people on The internet can answer for me. also, I can even find the resources of open course, yet I can learn law, marketing ,and philosophy even though my university doesn’t have those courses. In addition, when I find some open course interesting , I can learn no matter shine or rain, no matter where I am ,and no matter what time it is.
Finally , it is undeniable fact that the internet has changed the ways of communication. because of social media, people now can chat with their friends especially those who are living far away and make friends online. Furthermore,it also enable people to keep large number of relationship at the same time.
Thanks to The internet . it has created new ways for people to socialize and interact .As for studying, it really changed the ways of learning.
Therefore, my opinion is that the effects of this innovation has been positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, really, so, therefore, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95964125561 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71370644728 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0194221654 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218445185432 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797467746806 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887202516236 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139031604276 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114339521482 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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