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Internet provides a lot of information. Is excess information good or bad. Give reasons for your answer.
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Sentence: For example, one can gain information on future weather patterns, match scores, major develoments in political arena, future events being organised in one's area, sports news, blogs, stock market trends and shares, business develpments etc. These information can be accessed at any time and at any place; this thing has been possible only because of internet, which acts as an efficient, flexible, and quick method of watching and reading news.
Error: develpments Suggestion: developments
Error: develoments Suggestion: developments
Sentence: In summary, a lot of information on internet is a boon for people as it enables them to stay informed and upated.
Error: upated Suggestion: No alternate word
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Don't need to list reasons in the introduction and conclusion both. This will create duplicated content.
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 468 350
No. of Characters: 2326 1500
No. of Different Words: 233 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.651 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.97 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.593 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 183 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 132 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 94 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.867 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5