It is believed that age limitation should be disregarded for all applicants in the employment procedure do you think that disregarding age limitation has more positive or negative aspect?
These days, the various conditions that are employed in the employment procedure result in selecting the different people. One of the most important conditions that might use in process of employment is age limitation. It is believed that age limitation should be disregarded for all candidates in the employment process. I think that it depends on its vocation; nonetheless, its negative aspect outweighs its positive aspect, which is discussed in the following paragraphs.
On the upside, experienced people are allowed to applying for employment. Because of their experiences they are prepared to starting the tasks. Even the companies can employ them to do variety tasks that are not expected to do. Also people do not concern about their age that it will not restrict them to applying for employment. So people could apply for employment without realizing to their age restriction.
In a fleeting glance, it seems that the positive aspect of disregarding age limitation that is based on experiences of people is more important than negative aspect, while I believe that its negative aspect is more consideration than its positive aspect. The most important negative aspect is that the older people learned previously for a task and it is possible that they may hardly learn for another unimportant task but young people could prepare themselves for any task.
Also, the young people will employ who can learn any simple or difficult tasks. Although young people do not have a lot of experience in any task, they can learn easily rather than the other people. On the other hand, when young people employ, they will afford to manage their financial problems and their parents could help them fewer than when they are not in employment. Finally,
To summarize, disregarding age restriction in employment procedure, on the plus side, companies might employ people who have got experiences and on the mines side, the young people are prepare for any tasks easily. So I prefer the latter case than the former case.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21270718232 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.160220994475 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0994475138122 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524861878453 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0745856353591 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129834254144 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0414364640884 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73876367113 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220994475138 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0828729281768 0.0887237588012 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0359116022099 0.0209618222197 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.024861878453 0.0139019557991 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2028.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 330.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14545454545 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369696969697 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275757575758 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206060606061 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142424242424 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73876367113 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463636363636 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5904921992 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2022308038 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 48.2007575758 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.33653846154 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41994175558 0.300154397459 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180302141161 0.103427244359 174% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0912419978361 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587259565832 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166477690961 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168230345893 0.114077575197 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14284410272 0.0781384742642 183% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228246749114 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0661863085716 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254832972454 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161820061271 0.0618886996521 261% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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