It is better for children to grow up in the country side than in big city.Do you agree or disagree.
Growing up children in country side or in big cityes is now a big debate and both options have their on advantages and
disadvantages.Indeed it is sure that the environment the kids lives matters for the development of their behavior.
I believe that nurturing kids in big cityes have more advantages in their later life as compared to studying
in villages.
First reason is kids living in big cites have a better education as compared to the rural schools. For example,
I studied in a metropolitan city and we have computer lab in our school where as in my village school they teach about
computers but they don't have any exposure to computers. Do you think this matters? Surely I believe "yes" because this
help me to study better and get a good knowledge about computers and in turn helped me to get a job in that field itself.
Therefore, growing children in large cities have modern education and will help in their later life.
Secondly, students studying in large cities will adapt to the city environment easily in their later life. For
example, if a person finishes their studies in a village will probably come to the city for a job and he has to adapt with
the city environment. It will be difficult for them to adapt the fast life which can leads to depression. As a result
once studied in expanded cities have an advantage for this and they will easily handle the external things easily.
In conclusion, studying in village or in big city, both of them will acquire knowledge but will a certain advantages in
their exposure and will help in their later life.
- Parents today are more involved in their children education there before 61
- Do you agree or disagree the following? Television advertising directed towards young children (2-5 years old) should not be allowed. 60
- Young people now a days do not toward enough time to help their communities 60
- Some people say that internet provides lot of information. Others say that access to too much information leads to problem. 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7301430772 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476702508961 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0242999849 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17859857601 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760875760642 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734472353471 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709364692567 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085971172825 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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