It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
The environment that children live in is really important part of their lives. Children starts to learn everything from their childhood and the place that they live in and the people that they meet can effect their behavior and their future a lot. Some people that children should live in a city where they have enough facilities and they can reach everything that they need such as hospitals, schools etc. in a short period of time, others would disagree and though that children should grow in a place where they can breath fresh air and they can eat healthier food. In my opinion, growing in a city is better for a child for two important reasons.
The main reason is that there is a lot of amenities in cities. People have access to best hospitals, doctors, schools, universities and also there is lots of recreational areas in cities. My parents lives in the country from their childhood until my birthday. But when I was born, they decided to move to Tehran where we live now. Although it was difficult for them to migrate to a big city where they know no one, but they did it because they thought that it would help me to have better life in future and they have done everything to help me to be successful. When they decided to move to a big city, everyone tried to change their mind and told them about big cities problem such as air pollution, traffic jams, lots of crimes that happened there. But they did not listen and they migrate to Tehran. When I was a child and we traveled to my parents’s hometown, my cousin and I got a bad cold. When we got back home, my parents brought me to the hospital and I was there for three days and after that I became well. But unfortunately my cousin died because they could not find a good doctor who can find out his problem and so they could not help him. As you can see, living in big cities has many benefits to people, especially children who are more vulnerable and they need best facilities.
Another reason is that the best schools and universities are in big cities where students have lots of job opportunities when they finish their studies. In the other hand, it is hard or impossible to find a good school in a countryside. The school that children study is the most important place that can effect their future. A good teacher can courage students to study with interest and help them to be a successful person in future. In big cities, there are not many students in each class so the teachers have enough time to help students to find the best way for their life, but in the country teachers have many students in the class and it is hard to spend enough time for each of them. My father has a friend whom is a engineer and he earns a lot of money. He said that they were best friends in their childhood until his friend moved to Tehran with his family. They were neighbors and they used to go to school with each other everyday and my father was the best student in their class. But when he came to Tehran where we live now, he used better schools and he became more successful. He was the reason that my parents moved to Tehran. This experience taught him that being successful in a big city is more easier and possible than in a very small town.
In sum, though some may oppose that living in a big city is better for a child. Not only will give them more facilities for a convenient and comfortable life but also it will help them to have a better future and better jobs and better life when they grow. I think that the government should invest money in the countries too and they should give everyone the opportunity to have a good life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...h as hospitals, schools etc. in a short period of time, others would disagree and though that ...
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Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...n should grow in a place where they can breath fresh air and they can eat healthier fo...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...amenities in cities. People have access to best hospitals, doctors, schools, universiti...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...doctors, schools, universities and also there is lots of recreational areas in cities. My par...
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Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...ange their mind and told them about big cities problem such as air pollution, traffic ...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and help them to be a successful person in future. In big cities, there are not many stud...
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Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of them. My father has a friend whom is a engineer and he earns a lot of money. H...
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Line 3, column 936, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ey used to go to school with each other everyday and my father was the best student in t...
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Line 3, column 1213, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... that being successful in a big city is more easier and possible than in a very small town....
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217630853994 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.152892561983 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785123966942 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358126721763 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.112947658402 0.0685040099705 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103305785124 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.00826446280992 0.0351676179071 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.32257107112 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0399449035813 0.0309702414327 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00137741046832 0.00188951952338 73% => OK
Determiners: 0.0757575757576 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261707988981 0.0209618222197 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0261707988981 0.0139019557991 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3615.0 2387.08602151 151% => OK
No of words: 672.0 408.028673835 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37946428571 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09145979004 4.48200974243 114% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.258928571429 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.159226190476 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108630952381 0.174417080927 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0625 0.112833075102 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32257107112 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.375 0.524397521467 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.3908869067 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1415884161 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 38.3226190476 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.09132420091 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379805743017 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149467176595 0.103427244359 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929501149353 0.0752933317313 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.45720299505 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138139039291 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143942231435 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689035476222 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492580211542 0.336927656856 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0696926170053 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289735105781 0.210909579961 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033882425249 0.0618886996521 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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