It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
I disagree with the given claim that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. I believe that big city should always be the first choice when it comes to children’s overall growth and development. Also, there are prodigious number of other factors that make me go for the big city when it comes to this question.
First, a big city will have tremendous number of good schools and colleges, with all the institutions competing with each other to be the best. In such environment, it is easy for parents to search a good educational institute for their child, because most of them will be good. For an example, in Bangalore, owing to the increased competition between schools, even the poor people can afford to send their child to a very good school at a cheap price. A better school meaning better education and hence excellent academic growth of children. And the great thing is that good education is distributed evenly across different steps of economic ladder in a big city.
Second, when it comes to entertainment for children, big city is always number 1. This is because there are so many different mediums available nowadays. For an instance, if kids want to play, they can go to any sport centre and play which ever sport they want. Malls are also popular means of entertainment for kids. They have gotten movies, shopping centres, food courts and different video and VR games. All these amuses children. When it comes to exploring nature, parents can take their children to outskirts of the city to experience the serenity of nature. This count is endless. Whereas, the number of facilities available in the country side is limited.
In addition to having endless means of entertainments, children also get to explore more when they stay in the city. Take food for an instance, with so many restaurants open in the city, serving all varieties food from different cuisines, a child will never miss any country’s food. This helps them to understand different country’s culture without actually going there, which I believe is a very positive and good thing. Moreover, there are so many children clubs in big cities that focusses on other aspects of children’s overall growth like speaking skills, sport skills, painting, singing, etc. The amazing thing is that they are not rare and rife all over the localities. Here, children get to make new friends, compete with them in a healthy way and increase their abilities. Such kind of clubs enhances holistic strengths of children.
Therefore, we looked at different aspects of big cities which make them a better place for children to grow up than in the countryside. Awesome educational institutions available for all, great medium of entertainments and overall development of their well being are only possible in abundance and at ease in big cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... number 1. This is because there are so many different mediums available nowadays. For an inst...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enity of nature. This count is endless. Whereas, the number of facilities available in ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to make new friends, compete with them in a healthy way and increase their abilities. Such kind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96680497925 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77720480232 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48755186722 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0553517418 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34615384615 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271652721365 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831406995866 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124908444827 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18578743969 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101386940258 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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