Big city and countryside, both two places have their advantages and disadvantages on bringing up a child properly because lifestyles are totally different in these two places. When a big city is busy and polluted one, countryside is peaceful and less polluted, rich in natural beauty - these two different atmospheres affect in moulding the characteristics of a child. So, it is a contentious matter of discussion. But, in my opinion, a big city is appropriate for bringing up a child as it provides a greater exposure to the world.
To start with, now-a-days most of the big cities are become cos...
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most of the big cities are become cosmopolitan.
most of the big cities are becoming cosmopolitan.
most of the big cities have become cosmopolitan.
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