Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money is crucial in order to enjoy your life. However, when you utilize your money it is as important as earning them. Some people might say that it is better to enjoy your money when you earn it but I firmly believe that people should save money for some time in the future.
The main reason for this assertion is because we don't know what might happen in the future that requires money, so it would not hurt to have some spare cash. People need money for unexpected car accidents, they might need to pay extra tuition fees for their sons and daughters, or maybe you just want to go on a family vacation which all requires a fortunate amount of money. To illustrate this with the experience I went through, two years ago the car I was driving suddenly malfunctioned. The car went into to get a repair but I needed something immediately for transportation. Luckily, I had some money saved to buy a new car to replace my old car which I sold after it was fixed. If I hadn't saved any allowances I wouldn't have any options to cover up my immediate emergency.
Another reason for my statement is that when people are allow to use money with no plans they tend to waste it. People become irrational when they shop, they start to buy things they won't even use. Even somewhere in their brain they know that they don't necessarily need it, however, they just buy it anyway because it just feels good at the moment. This happens a lot when girls go shopping at a department store and when boys roam around game stores. Instead of making this happening, it is much better to rather save the money and plan out how to use it in the future to optimize the usage of it.
Finally, It is really satisfying to see the amount of money you have increase day by day. People often say that spending money relieve your stress but they don't mention how equally satisfying it is to see your bank deposited number rise. This is because the money you have indicates your hard work and consistent effort. I remember me bragging to my friends whenever I saved a lot of money, they always praised for my endurance and will to resist using all that money. Plus, when you save lot of money you can buy a quality item with all the money you saved such as a BMW, or a big screen TV etc.
To sum up, because of all the reasons I mention above it is clear to me that people should save money for the future. They should not give in to the impulse to spend all the money they just earn for useless reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...reason for this assertion is because we dont know what might happen in the future th...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ld car which I sold after it was fixed. If I hadnt saved any allowances I wouldnt ...
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Suggestion: hadn't
...r which I sold after it was fixed. If I hadnt saved any allowances I wouldnt have any...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...ixed. If I hadnt saved any allowances I wouldnt have any options to cover up my immedia...
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Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...statement is that when people are allow to use money with no plans they tend to waste ...
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Suggestion: don't
...here in their brain they know that they dont necessarily need it, however, they just...
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...timize the usage of it. Finally, It is really satisfying to see the amount of money you have inc...
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion:
...d such as a BMW, or a big screen TV etc. To sum up, because of all the reasons I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, even so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33978494624 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2588590512 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4313581902 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0952380952 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410607802622 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139294482264 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113308557364 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263708020719 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164864587129 0.0645574589148 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.