Humans have long faced the question that whether they should save their money for the future or enjoy it. Former choice is unquestionably painful and requires strict displine to control their desires and aspirations. On the other hand, later one is tempting as one can quickly reward herself by buying expensive products and gadgets. Well, if you ask me what will I given such a situation, I would definetly opt for saving the money. In the follwing essay, I have explained compelling reasons to support my choice.
First of all, saving money prepares one for any unexpected emergencies that might occur in the future, such as, accidents, natural calamities, or detection of life-threatening disease, etc. Such situations require hefty amount of money and that too within a very small period of time. If a person does not have money in account, he is forced to borrow money from freinds, relatives, or banks who leverage hefty rate of interest. Moreover, if a person is not able to pay back the loan in the sipulated time, then, the lenders resort to malpractices such as exortion or mudering to recover their loan. Therefore, it is prudent to save a fixed amount of money every month to prepare for any unfortunate circumstance.
Secondly, saving money in fixed deposits enables a person to earn passive income while working. These schemes provide a fixed sum of interest every month to the depositor. For example, I was regularly creating FDs for six years and as a result, bought an apartment in a luxurious district. It could not have bought it solely from my income from the corporate job. Hence, people should act wisely in spending their money. Some people buy expensive phones, cars and watches to show off to their friends and relatives. However, according to me, they make a blunder in investing in these stuff as their value depriciate significantly over time and also, they get outdated swiftly when new product comes.
Hence, one has to make a trade off between saving and expenditure. I understand that one buying expensives stuff is satisfying but one has to be pragmatic in making the right choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... money and that too within a very small period of time. If a person does not have money in acc...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...rstand that one buying expensives stuff is satisfying but one has to be pragmatic in making t...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e pragmatic in making the right choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9217877095 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70132384691 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606145251397 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7111959946 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219754407177 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598574231028 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620375856634 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115925461615 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556345292366 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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