Some people believe that nowadays life has become more convenient and relaxing while others strongly oppose this viewpoint and contend that it is tougher and more stressful than before. Personally, I believe that life is more comfortable than our grandparents when they were children. I support this idea for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, technologically advanced gadgets namely, smart phones, smart watches, and home appliances, such as washing machines, microwave oven have reduced human efforts by a significant amount. For instance, we no longer have to perform excrutiating mathematical calculations or wash clothes by hands as these tasks are easily done by machines at our disposal. Such technologies were not available to our grandparents who had to perform each and every task by hand which made their life hectic and stressful.
Secondly, today’s generation enjoys myriad means of transportation, such as cars, motorbikes and public buses which have further made our life convenient. For instance, our grandparents primarily used cycles for travelling from place to another. Cycles not only took exorbitated amount of time but also were prone to accidents. It was highly dangerous for them to travel with family on the bicycle. In contrast, nowadays, we are able to travel thousands of miles with family without thinking of accidents.
However, some may argue that life has become more stressful as people nowadays, are working longer hours than ever before and do not live their life as peacefully as our grandparents used to live. I do agree with them to some extent; however, I believe that employees who are working under pressure constitute only a small percentage of the overall population as the major proportion enjoy their work and are highly satisfied. They should rather find alternative jobs or business that they truly love and reap the benefits in the era of sophisticated gadgets which make our life comfortable.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that today's generation life is more comfortable than ever before because of the reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... In conclusion, I strongly believe that todays generation life is more comfortable tha...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30383480826 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88188663503 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1001732499 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.866666667 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264788943754 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092439435121 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128611774695 0.0662205650399 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156700555244 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970702691828 0.0443174109184 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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