Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
Money play an important factor in our lives. With money we can purchase our dream house, dream car and fulfell our goals. Although some people prefer to spend money once they earn it, I prefer to spend money some time in the future. The basis for my views is because future can hold so many surperises. Possissing money can save me in the rainy days, improve my family education level or buy my dream house.
There is no deny that future hold many changes that we are not well prepared for. For example, some people can suffer form certain disease or illness that required immediate medical intervention. Since medical expenses like surgery, hospital fees and medication are costly, patients could postpond the treatment if they don't have enough money. Thus, this could pose risk to patients' live's.
In addition to the unexpected changes, improve my family level of education is another important factor why I prefer to spend my money in the future. Given that with ever increasing in college tuition fees, only people who are possess good amount of money can afford enrolling their children at well reputation universities. If I spend all my money on stuff that I don't really want now, I will loss the oportunity to enrol my children into the university they wish to join.
Finally, buying my dream house is another aspect that pushes me to save money for the future. In my home town, Vancouver, house prices are increasing incredibly. Provided that average house can cost at least one million dollars, customers reuired to pay at least 10 precent down payment. Not to mention, ulternative house expenses like furnture, wall painting and garden maintenance. If I spend all my money now, I will lose the hope to buy my dream house in the future.
AS a conclusion, Even though some people prefer to spend their money now to enjoy their live's, spending my money in the future on something that I really want will have significant tangible advantages not only for me, but also for my family.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Money play an important factor in our lives.
Description: The fragment Money play an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense
The basis for my views is because future can hold so many surperises.
The basis for my views is that future can hold so many surperises.
improve my family level of education is another important factor
improving my family level of education is another important factor
Sentence: With money we can purchase our dream house, dream car and fulfell our goals.
Error: fulfell Suggestion: fulfill
Sentence: Since medical expenses like surgery, hospital fees and medication are costly, patients could postpond the treatment if they don't have enough money.
Error: postpond Suggestion: postpone
Sentence: If I spend all my money on stuff that I don't really want now, I will loss the oportunity to enrol my children into the university they wish to join.
Error: oportunity Suggestion: opportunity
Error: enrol Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Provided that average house can cost at least one million dollars, customers reuired to pay at least 10 precent down payment.
Error: precent Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: reuired Suggestion: required
Sentence: Not to mention, ulternative house expenses like furnture, wall painting and garden maintenance.
Error: furnture Suggestion: furniture
Error: ulternative Suggestion: alternative
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 346 350
No. of Characters: 1605 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.313 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.639 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.36 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.495 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Money play an important factor in our lives. With ...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ts could postpond the treatment if they dont have enough money. Thus, this could pos...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ng in college tuition fees, only people who are possess good amount of money can afford...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'possessed'.
Suggestion: possessed
...llege tuition fees, only people who are possess good amount of money can afford enrolli...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to enrol', 'to enroll'.
Suggestion: to enrol; to enroll
...possess good amount of money can afford enrolling their children at well reputation unive...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...If I spend all my money on stuff that I dont really want now, I will loss the oportu...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261780104712 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.15445026178 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0628272251309 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549738219895 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0942408376963 0.0685040099705 138% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109947643979 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0183246073298 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43691185996 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340314136126 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0628272251309 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287958115183 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104712041885 0.0139019557991 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1997.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 344.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80523255814 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322674418605 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223837209302 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151162790698 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0813953488372 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43691185996 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.3901711048 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1111111111 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7549364005 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.944444444 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.4948320413 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.28448275862 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29934152533 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900994515181 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704962551029 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504458772655 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156012143258 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111433074321 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791439150981 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248688669565 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0871997581063 0.067059652881 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194906157329 0.210909579961 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503803900899 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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