Many of us at least once in our life-time face the issue whether it is to enjoy with his money or save it for later on, which one would be more satisfying for us? Although some people prefer to enjoy with there money, I would definitely take a step back and stat saving. The reasons for which my prospect is based on will be discussed in detail below.
First and foremost, Principle of the balance between saving and spending provides a steady flow of information about the value of the the matters, The concept of the saving is a cornerstone of today's society, in fact , we need knowledge to sustain our life and without it we couldn't survive in contemporary realities. Furthermore, many of the working adults have families which depend on them and rely on their decisions.
Secondly, as the old saying goes "no risk, no reward', because successes often times accompany risks, there are fewer opportunities for rewards without any risks, and usually saving and not spending money will have some risks of getting some problems with people. Take my self for example, when i graduated from the university with a bachelor's degree, I was faced with two choices. One was to continue studying in the same university for a master's degree without any risks and enjoy with my time. The second one was to study abroad without knowing which university would admit me and spend my whole money on the Education. Wanting a better future, I chose to travel abroad and spend my money on the master's degree and in doing so, I succeeded in getting admitted into a university abroad.
Lastly, from psychological aspect, spending money on wise way should contribute in building the person. As for society, encourage anyone to enjoy his money and then will fall in the debt in any area and ignoring them in there most crucial conjuncture of life, will cause many problems. This notion may cause other problems such as depression, alienation and also ruin their self-confidence. I personally believe this is not good for development of the society in the future due to the fact that self-confidence and positive thinking are chief motivators of societies.
To summarize, the real situation necessitates wisdom to thoroughly weigh the pros and cons before jumping to spend money on the something useless. As discussed above, I can safely come to the conclusion that saving money is safer in making sure there is higher chance of success and it's more favorable since it is the most effective way in ensuring a higher success rate and will save people from undue troubles as well as assist them to prospect further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as for, as to, at least, for example, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85617977528 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65116965829 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541573033708 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9687432154 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0625 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8125 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242146565148 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683975727526 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450774317842 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114379874339 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577320378415 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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