Books are one of the strong sources that it helps people to gain more information. There are a plethora of various types of books, with different contents, which can be divided into two groups, books contains real events and story books. The majority of people claim that reading plenty of facts from books has more vital role than novels.I am in opinion that although reading books containing real facts can have high valuable to improve redundancy awareness, fiction books help kids to develop their imagination.
To begin with, the miniority of people has genuine interests to reading non-fiction books. It is because that this types of books requires mostly the hardships of life, which impress people to be in stress and get depressed. While other books included facts have an important role in students or adults life, because that it gives a data which the people have not heard or known before. As a result, the world can face lots of people who are knowledgeable.
On the other hand, there are strong arguments to support the opposite idea. Mostly the kids prefer to read tales, which are bedtime readings. The first and furthermost benefit of reading novels is being entertaining books, which is far away from real facts that makes kids think about difficulties, which leads to stress in early ages. Moreover, the second advantage is developing people’s fantasy. For example, when people read a novel they start to make an empathy with novel character, and starts to be like him/her. In other words, novels encompass the things which we cannot imply it in real life, such as flying like a bird. As a result, this type of books inspires people and commence to think in a different way.
To sum up, both books have their own advantages., Non-fiction books force people to face realities, which has a positive impact on us, while fiction books are more inspirational to be different person.
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past 76
- It is more important for student to read books about real events than it is for them to read novels. 70
- Some people believe that a government's responsibility should provide care and financial support for people after they retire. Other said that people should help themselves. Do you agree or disagree, and what is your opinion? 78
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has negative effects on both families and societies. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 11
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91925465839 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53841288739 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8942030213 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251372532827 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724680950599 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060958087534 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144535826049 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635651798886 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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