It is better to spend the money of rich persons for which of charity organizations? health careprovide foodstart the small business?

Essay topics:

It is better to spend the money of rich persons for which of charity organizations?
health care
provide food
start the small business?

It is better to spend the money of rich persons for which of charity organizations?
health care
provide food
start the small business?

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Average: 4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...s for which of charity organizations? health care provide food start the small bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 43.0788530466 2% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 52.1666666667 6% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 120.0 1977.66487455 6% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 23.0 407.700716846 6% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.18993870309 4.48103885553 49% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.72355821972 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 21.0 212.727598566 10% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.913043478261 0.524837075471 174% => OK
syllable_count: 33.3 618.680645161 5% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.5 48.9658058833 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.0 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.45110844103 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.673520504578 0.236089414692 285% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.436605006512 0.076458572812 571% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.253887020418 0.0737576698707 344% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.444172605935 0.150856017488 294% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.246319420996 0.0645574589148 382% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 5.0 86.8835125448 6% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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