It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet.
I strongly disagree that using printed materials is better to do an investigation than using the internet.
First, the information found on the internet is huge, current and easily available. The advantage of the internet is that you have an immense amount of information at your fingertips. In the case of serious research, a researcher can get access to the best quality and most relevant kind of information that there is out there. For example, a scientist can find the latest “nature” magazine where the most current scientific journals are published. A doctor may visit the web page of the pharmaceutical company to read about the new medication for heart diseases.
On the other hand, printed materials are difficult to find, they are limited to libraries and bookstores. For example, not long, about twenty years, my chemistry graduation thesis on super absorbents materials, took me about a year to be completed. The information I found in my city was not enough, so I had to travel to various cities to find the information needed. Nowadays, if I were to use the internet, it would take me a couple of months to do the same research.
Last, the internet provides the opportunity to get support from other people. For instance, right now, a person doing research on superabsorbents can get in touch with other researchers around the world doing exactly the same investigation, by means of blogging, chatting, video chat, etc. hence, making his investigation more relevant and most likely better quality.
By way of conclusion, I am in the opinion that the internet is a better resource to do an investigation that any printed materials.
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- Global warming 70
- Smarr cars technology 75
- It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. 76
- In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young 70
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment – doing things they like to do—rather that doing thigs they should do. 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or heart diseases. On the other hand, printed materials are difficult to find,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05090909091 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09015177888 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4801951814 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299357479706 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102852021255 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143912194227 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213365454813 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176511016139 0.0645574589148 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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