Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It has been critically important the part dancing plays in past and current cultures. I agree with the idea that dancing is vital in most cultures. I will explain in the following essay.
To start with, folklore dance has been a unify part of past societies. American Indians used dancing as a way to celebrate or express sorrow. For instance, native American Indians, the tribes used to celebrate a good day hunt by gathering around a huge bonfire and dance all night. Mostly they gave thanks to their gods for the good fortune in the hunt. Furthermore, if a member of the tribe passed away, the also dance around the same fire, to give a farewell to the next life.
Second, today’s society dance to celebrate. Nowadays, most societies dance to show emotions of happiness. For example, at birthday parties, or the end of year festivities, these are just examples of how current cultures uses dancing as a way of expressing the emotions. Take, for example, Colombian culture, the country I am originally from, we usually use dancing as a form of getting to know someone new. This is especially important among young people. In my country, if you want to date someone, most likely the girl is expecting to be asked out to dance, even if they know each other for just a short period of time. I, myself used this type of approach when I wanted to date a girl. But that was a while ago.
Lastly, dance is a form of building tighter relations. Take, for example, the Amazonian Indians, the Australians Aborigines, Africans natives, etc. They live deep in the jungle of South America, in the hot desserts od Australian and in the Sabana of Africa. All of them use dance to express emotions of happiness a sorrow. Consequently, all cultures have used dancing as a form of getting together and build bonds among the members of the tribes.
By way of conclusion, I believe that dancing had and still plays a very important part of the way people in our societies relate and interact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, lastly, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70487106017 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60377902127 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555873925501 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8028924595 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8636363636 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20199087712 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588693380776 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045615645792 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115378782558 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181276741881 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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