Is it better to use a tour guide in your trip or do it by yourself
Many people think they can enjoy their
journeys to new places by themselves, not using a tour
guide. They say that tour guides restrict their freedom. Although I
understand their point of view, I have a different opinion.
I believe that a tour guide is very important because
he/she can helps us make the best of the trip's
time, and can helps us visit places we don’t even
know.First, tour guides are a
professional
people, who can help us a lot during our trips so we can
make the best use of it. They know how long it
takes to go from one point to another, they know how long it
takes to visit a certain places, they know which is near to
which and which is far, they know if the weather is
appropriate to visit that place or not, and what can replace
that place if not. Really they have answers almost to
all our questions. I can remember when my sister in law and
her husband were planning a trip to a foreign country; they
used a travelling agency to recommend them a tour
guide. When they arrived their destination they
founded him waiting for them, and all the
reservation they would need were done. He organized a very
elegant week for them. They enjoyed every single moment.
Before they finished visiting one site, he was ready with
what the next step was. When they came back, they said that
they would never enjoy their trip or visit different places
as much as they did, if they were by themselves not
with that tour guide.Next, due to their work nature tour
guides are always up to date with any touristic discovery,
or with any new valuable places that really deserve
visiting. When I recall my memories about my honeymoon, I
regret that we didn't hire a tour guide to help us, we
were depending on recommendation from friends and family
members. We reserved a room in a romantic resort, although
we enjoyed the resort, but after few days, we got bored,
there was not a lot to do. We tried to ask about any
activity to do or touristic places we can visit. We
didn't get a lot of information to help us. When we went
back home, accidentally, we met with a tour guide, who told
us that we missed many sights we could see and visit in that
city. Now, if I was to redo my honeymoon again or if am
going to plan any future trip, for sure, I'll ask for a
tour guide’s help.In conclusion, for the reasons
mentioned above, I encourage every person who is planning to travel, to hire a tour
guide. Why not you ask for a tour guide’s help for your next trip? If you did
so, you will discover for yourself how this man/lady will be
a real gift from the heaven to your trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...by themselves not with that tour guide.Next, due to their work nature tour guides ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50513347023 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35865388473 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496919917864 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 9.59856630824 292% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2140011563 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.35 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 46.0 4.53405017921 1015% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205590773976 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665766828255 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701931941509 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513483817827 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656495086932 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.