It has been found out that homeschooling has its pros and cons. From your own point of view, what would or would not make you decide to homeschool your own children?
There is no shortage of debate about pros and cons of homeschooling . Some parents would agree that homeschooling is worse than public school due to homeschooling’s cons. In my personal opinion, I totally believe that homeschooling advantages overwiegh its disadventages . Therefore, I would rather decide to homeschool my kids for two main reasons ; homeschooling’s flexiblity and individual teaching .
The first reason why I prefer to teach my kids at home is that homeschooling is more flexible than public schools . Homeschooling lets parents make time for things that matter most. For example, homeschoolers can let their students study for four weeks and then make a week off . This week off makes them travel ,so parents and their children would not be restricted to travel in the time their kids have vacation from public schools . Parents can let their kids visit their relatives any any time of the year they want .They also have more time to spend with the family or do other beneficial healthy activities like exercising. Homeschooling is flexible because parents can set their own calendar .They do not have to follow schools’ calenders ,but instead follow their own.
Not only does homeschooling provide flexibility, but also it does provide individual teaching . In public schools teachers have more than one students to teach that’s why they have to follow the same teaching pace for every students in each single class . However , homeschoolers only have one or two students to focus on . Thus, having one student to teach makes parents concentrate on their kids weaknesses and put tremendous effors strenghening weak points their kids have .On the other hand, parents would know what their kids excel at ,and thus this would make them teach that particular subjects the kids are excellent at faster. Therefore, kids skills and abilities are going to be improved.Studens’ knowledge is going to be enriched more than when they study at school.
In brief, we all know that both public school and homeschool teachings have both pros and cons . On the contrary, I think that homeschooling is much better than public school for the reasons I mentioned above . Therefore, I would absolutely choose to homeschool my kids , and I would recommed parents do the same .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in brief, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21138211382 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10951785511 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49864498645 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.367401489 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210553914514 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866596375797 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574213406057 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16079023517 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067485736112 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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