Family and friends both are important for the young adults. Friends are play huge role in the young adult whether it may be in fun or in a study. On the other hand family are always with them in any situation. I believe that family is the most important influence on young adults. My view is based on the psychological, intellectual and financial reasons.
First, family play a central role in young adult life. For instance, Family member are with them from the birth. There are many relationships which is build in the family like mother, father, brother and sister. All have upbring similar, and they grown up in a same environment and emotionally connected. They go through the thousand of the life situation. They have the same custom, norm and value. That’s the reason young adult are more attach with the family as compared to the friends.
Secondly, intellectual impacts are shape the young adult’s mind, and It give the direction to the mind to think as what kind of impact they are going through. And it’s all depend on the there family. Parent develop the habit from the childhood to read, write and play. Their interests are same as the their parent have.Goals are based on the how the youngster's parents taught. For example, they follow same religion and even political view are same as their parent. In Addition to this, In India, people are used to live with joint family and they respect elders and their decisions.this rule is going ahead by generation. Therefor, these are the result of the intellectual impacts.
Last but not least, youngster are alway depend financially on the parents. They need help from the parents in study and pocket money. Cloth , House, and school all depend on the family prosperity. Sometime young’s adult can not even think against family choice.
From the above reasons and examples, i strongly believe that family does influence on the young adult’s life, and the family impact is greater than the friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94925373134 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5641983891 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5506874027 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9583333333 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25409877497 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075478054161 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111008983144 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15531638171 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110862481005 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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