Some people believe that shopping malls are ruin and damage the employment because all the big companies cover the space of markets. But from my point of view, shopping center will prove beneficial when it build my neighborhood for many reasons.
First, Shopping centers will give the employment. In shopping mall, there will many staff need to manage it. Watch man, accountant, security guard, and management staff, peon, sweepers etc will be the vacant place, which will give the job to local community. For instance, in my town there before 10 years ago, there were many small shops but most of them are not got a good customers so the shopkeeper got in loss. But now on that places there are many new shopping malls are opened and now local community got job and now their living standard is better than before.
Secondly, Shopping malls create other opportunities like they help to develop market nearby that area indirectly. For example, In my town there are many restaurants and showrooms are open near by after the shopping mall inauguration and they also do well as shopping malls. It may be because it helps to attract more customers in that area and create a competition so shops are improving their products qualities.
Last but not least, Shopping centers are also helps to betterment in transportation system. Because many people are come by the private and public transport. So the local community is also benefits from this. Because they can start their careers in transportation like drivers, ticket collector or you even rant your cars to make money.you can also open a parking area to make money. For instance, now there are not any transport system for the people to go college, office and any emergency situation. Many people do not get a cars if any body get sick to get in hospitals. So, if the transport system will better through the shopping centers then it will work as god I think.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly support that recently announced shopping mall will be beneficial for the local people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53793423951 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2742808439 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147797665678 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049525963031 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443095028243 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975210855253 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516549094723 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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