Shopping centers consists of a variety of items. These days enumerate brands have emerged making it way more simple to purchase a product in need. In my opinion, I strongly agree with announcement of building a large shopping center in my neighborhood with three reasons. To elaborate one has to go through scrupulous discussions below to get an idea of the positives related to the matter around.
Firstly, aged people cannot travel to far places to purchase a product that is needed. For instance, in present situation when a person want to purchase clothes he/she has to travel around 5 miles to reach a shopping center. This will not be possible in all cases when the old are sick even to get medicines it would be difficult for them to travel such distant places. Instead if a mall is build in nearby area then there would be no need of travelling and everything would be present at fingertips to purchase.
Secondly, these days markets are divided based on the products they sell. For instance, pharmacy services are all placed in a particular area which is distant from another market area which consists of only clothes. It would be difficult for a consumer when he/she want to purchase both the products at the same time. Introducing mall will provide an amply options in a single place which makes it easier for all the customers who want to purchase a variety kind of things at a time.
Furthermore, the area around the mall constructed will be highly developed. For instance, at present the neighborhood doesn't have good transport facilities nor raft people in the area because of poor sanitization conditions. Once the mall is constructed the rush in the particular place increases which in turn helps to develop the communication between places. The area becomes center and prominent part of the city which leads to good infrastructure development around.
To conclude, many will argue that constructing a large shopping center would be a good idea as it may can lead to more accidents due to the rush around but there are many positives than negatives due to it's establishment. The rush can be controlled by careful observation and effective implementation of traffic rules in the particular area. So, large shopping center is beneficial for overall improvement of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...for them to travel such distant places. Instead if a mall is build in nearby area then ...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...be difficult for a consumer when he/she want to purchase both the products at the sa...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to purchase a variety kind of things at a time. Furthermore, the area around th...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...r instance, at present the neighborhood doesnt have good transport facilities nor raft...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecause of poor sanitization conditions. Once the mall is constructed the rush in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, kind of, in all cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9354005168 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83672211685 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521963824289 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6963461094 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105556184794 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370228137794 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391637395355 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06617893306 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398332602105 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.