Lately it has been announced that a new library can be built in my neighborhood.
However, as I am concerned, there is no longer such a plan. The argument of my point of view is the following. For starters, people seldom sell a book in recent times. With the improvement of technology. And in technology, humans have many techniques to enjoy themselves. I could watch television at home, Pass to observe the sport of soccer, play basketball and so on. In my place of birth, every time I choose Reading book in a library. They decide to rent a book and read it at home, that's better cozy
In addition, there are many libraries now. As I admit, it's better to walk fifteen minutes.
Between the 2 theaters of my community. As a final result, it is obvious that it is not necessary. 1/3 one. If we build all the other libraries, ordinary humans consistent with the library will decrease, which It makes each library earn much less money. However, there is no less important, to a certain extent, a waste of money. Some of the fields. For example, there is a better faculty. Take a few middle children
One hour to go to high school from home. If we are able to build any other school with preference in the theater, Students spend less time on their manners, that's safer because there are many buses and cars on the street.
In conclusion, it is necessary to define these reasons for the occasion at the time it will be created to shape a Complete organic and, as a result, it turns out to be more persuasive than any of them. Then any questioning character I need to agree that it is not necessary to build a library.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 420, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Reading) must be used with a third-person verb: 'books'.
Suggestion: books
...e of birth, every time I choose Reading book in a library. They decide to rent a boo...
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Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ide to rent a book and read it at home, thats better cozy In addition, there are m...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... to a certain extent, a waste of money. Some of the fields. For example, there is a better ...
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Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...dents spend less time on their manners, thats safer because there are many buses and ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47474747475 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59395215565 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8790994408 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.45 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.85 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762449496817 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202471283269 0.076458572812 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491161273498 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538800744544 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077532325448 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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