As a result our hometown has a very important effect on our lives . If a movie theater were going to be built in my hometown I am sure some people would support it and other would oppose with it . In my view adding a movie theater would not be a good idea for several reason :
The main reason is that addition will create a lot of noises and traffic to the region , people who would come to see the movie most likely are coming to have fun with children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and needed some space in order to park their vehicles that they came with , for example I have a friend of mine that a Cinema were built near her home, for that matter, she and her neighbors had been Suffered from lack Of space for park their vehicles outside ,traffic all the time and noises that children and some adult people were making late night . These people wouldn't have had those problem if it were not because of the Cinema.
Another reason for my opinion is, I believe in order to build something in such a big space ,there are better idea which would not create those problems that I just mentioned . For example adding a library would be a positive idea because not only it create a good way for resident to study more ,but it makes the region more quite .the residents would not have had such a good source for Extend their knowledge easily and near their home if it weren't because of the library .
In sum , through some people may support the plan that would not be a great addition , not only it creates so much noise and traffic , but the space could be use in better ways .
- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader it is not as important as a leader s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers 50
- According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies act 43
- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned wit 45
- TOEFL T P O 2 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As a result our hometown has a very import...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...has a very important effect on our lives . If a movie theater were going to be bui...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...upport it and other would oppose with it . In my view adding a movie theater would...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ie theater would not be a good idea for several reason : The main reason is that addition ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be a good idea for several reason : The main reason is that addition will cr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... lot of noises and traffic to the region , people who would come to see the movie ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing to have fun with children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ith children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and needed some space ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... park their vehicles that they came with , for example I have a friend of mine tha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Of space for park their vehicles outside ,traffic all the time and noises that chi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...some adult people were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those pro...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not b...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...e night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not because of the Cinema. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if it were not because of the Cinema. Another reason for my opinion is, I beli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r to build something in such a big space ,there are better idea which would not cr...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ate those problems that I just mentioned . For example adding a library would be a...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... be a positive idea because not only it create a good way for resident to study more ,...
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Suggestion: ,
...te a good way for resident to study more ,but it makes the region more quite .the ...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...more ,but it makes the region more quite .the residents would not have had such a ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...wledge easily and near their home if it werent because of the library . In sum , t...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...home if it werent because of the library . In sum , through some people may su...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if it werent because of the library . In sum , through some people may support...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rent because of the library . In sum , through some people may support the pla...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... plan that would not be a great addition , not only it creates so much noise and t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nly it creates so much noise and traffic , but the space could be use in better wa...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ut the space could be use in better ways .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, of course, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01204408694 2.67179642975 75% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503333333333 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.608870316 48.9658058833 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.142857143 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.8571428571 20.6045352989 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11131492367 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610420283637 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685134560213 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924227225698 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668275032197 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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