It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In my view building a new movie theater is great and it is beneficial to the place and the people who live in that place for the following reasons.
First and for most, it is true that building such a place make the neighborhood crowded and a little dirty, but it has a lot of advantages that overweight the disadvantages. Building a theater bring some benefits to the place such as building new shopping centers, restaurants and markets near that place which a lot of people come to visit the place each day. For example, when I was a child, I lived in a little town with my family. When I was seven, the mayor of the town decided to build a theater in our neighborhood. At first, all our neighbors thought that building that place will bring a lot of pollution and trouble to the environment but after building that not only it did not polluted the place but it also made it a better place because they tried hard to decorate the place to attract people from other places. Our neighborhood was cleaner. After some year we had a great shopping center, lots of restaurant and also a great beautiful park near our house. I think that after about 2-3 years it was a fantastic place that everyone in the town wanted to spend time there.
Second, I think it is great to have such a place near your home. So, you can spend time there when you are depressed or also when you are happy or you are with your friends. I remember that whenever I was unhappy or feel tired I spent time in the theater with my family and after that we sometimes went to the restaurant or go walking in the park. I also found my best friend in the theater. My grandmother always told me crowded places are much better places because you can see a lot of people and facilities are always near such places.
At the end, as I mentioned new movie theater will brings a lot of advantages to its neighborhood and I think it is good to have one near your home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'pollute'
Suggestion: pollute
...after building that not only it did not polluted the place but it also made it a better ...
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Line 2, column 904, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun restaurant seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of restaurants'.
Suggestion: lots of restaurants
...me year we had a great shopping center, lots of restaurant and also a great beautiful park near ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
..., as I mentioned new movie theater will brings a lot of advantages to its neighborhood...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, i think, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31404958678 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43088871048 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432506887052 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0348056373 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097306106623 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445685398849 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439674941413 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896335335372 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428838546887 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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