Our city is significant for us because it provides everything which we need to survive. If our town wants to set up a cinema, some will support it, and other people will oppose it. As per as I am concerned, I corroborate this idea. I feel this way for two most important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason is that a theater will create new job. As to built and operate a movie theater required more employee and employer, a new job place will be available for the city dweller, and that is essential for them. For instance, my city, Comilla recently established a new cinema hall in the center of the town. From the process of site-selection to finish whole work more than 2000 people work on it. As a result, they get benefited from the cinema. Moreover, I recently read an advertisement in the daily newspaper, which asked some potential manager and technician for the movie, and that were very prestigious jobs for people who don't have a job at all. This experience taught me that to build a new movie center is very good for the city denizen.
Secondly, a movie theater will add more taxes which could be used for enhancing the city citizen facilities. Since more and more new business will start nearby the cinema, and more people will enjoy cinema and pay taxes, a tremendous economic flow will start. For example, as I said in the last passage, after the start up the movie center, many howkers, as well as the small businessman, get a way to make the profit from their shops as the number of customers is increasing day by day. Also, the cinema fare is including taxes so that the government will be benefited from the movie center.
In sum up, it's always better to get new things in the community, and I believe this movie theater will bring many unique benefits. This is because it will create a job vacancy and because it will ensure the progression of the city. Every city should establish a new theater in their locality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56179775281 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50096560067 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525280898876 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8876262463 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139872166874 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053580690775 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401141329703 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920882065879 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017760110562 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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