it is importan to tell truth always
These days, we can find hardly relationship based on honesty and loyalty. Some people prefer to tell a white lie when their benefits is at stake. Even though there are a lot of such people, but, I personally insist to telling truth to people with whom I communicate. As a Persian proverb says: there is not any legacy valuable than truth, in my opinion too, it is a significant and priceless characteristic in people with whom we want to get along for the simple reason that we always can trust them. It is equally important to make friendship and communicate with others honestly and tell them truth under any circumstances because of its advantageous for both us and our friends. By this way, we can be free of stress about the lie, even white lie, and other feel more close to us, and also it add an improper characteristic to our personality, lie easily.
Firstly, we can rely on our friends unless they be honest with us. In fact, we get communication with others in order to spend our life nicely. We spend most of our happy times and sad times with our friends. It will be shape in a good condition if people treat with each other fairly, accordingly it stem from telling truth always. For example, some people make a wrong toward their friends and try to not reveal for them by telling lie, even they think it is a white lie to keep relationship, their friends would be disappointed with it. It have more permanent effects in comparison to tell truth and give explanation about the reason of wrong. The lies often destroy an individual faith in his or her friends. They cannot rely on them no longer and they will always weigh on the right and wrong treatment.
Secondly, people who tell lie their friend under some conditions, will be always concern about revealing it through their relationship and following weaken their friendship relation. They will not be relax to behave with their friends routinely. One effect of this condition is that they must always think about what to say. For example, my brother have told a white lie to our sister who is his best friend in his life, now he is stressful about his lie and sometimes question from us if she know it. Besides, he cannot make a good communication with her because of a feeling of regret and being guilty. But additionally, as a Persian proverb says lie bring more lie, someone who tell lie, cannot stop telling lie. So, by passing time it is high possible to be a lier person in all aspect of his or her life. To explain why it will happen we can look at a principle of psychology, a behavior can convert to a habit, and a habit can came a characteristic in human beings.
By taking all of these in account, in my opinion it is vital for everyone to be honest toward other people in his or her social life. Telling truth, bring a lot of benefits for people. They make have free-stress relationships with other. The people can trust to them, so they will have more valuable and reliable relationships with others. And least but not last, their characteristic of being honest will not change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'find'.
Suggestion: hardly find
These days, we can find hardly relationship based on honesty and loyal...
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Line 1, column 797, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adds'?
Suggestion: adds
...ther feel more close to us, and also it add an improper characteristic to our perso...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stems'?
Suggestion: stems
... with each other fairly, accordingly it stem from telling truth always. For example,...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... accordingly it stem from telling truth always. For example, some people make a wrong ...
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Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...iends would be disappointed with it. It have more permanent effects in comparison to...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...e and sometimes question from us if she know it. Besides, he cannot make a good comm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, honestly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2514.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55434782609 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60612544481 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452898550725 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3988481589 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155511817959 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536264662199 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688276257013 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114631334441 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385569953861 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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