Govenment should make several improvements for poeple dwelling in its country to make their life better, more profitable and healtier. One of the most important issue in our country, Turkey, is transportation. It is a really serious problem so I absolutely disagree that it is more important for govenments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
First supportive idea that I want mention is that public transportation is a curial becase the increase amount of cars effect air badly. In time, air have been polluted and this effects people life seriously. I believe that instead of using private cars, using public transportation daily absolutely makes air better and people will not get serious ills because of air pollution.
Additionally, the other important issue about public transportation is that there is not enough buses and people are trouble when they want to use buses. To illustrate, I always use bus to go to my company from 40 minutes far away from with bus and also 1 and half an hour with my private car. Therefore, I prefer bus but i wait the empty bus for a twenty minutes almost everday because lack of buses in my country. Government must do something about it because not only me but also many people like me get angry and feel uncomfortable about it. Infact, our life standards decrease.
Besides, air pollution and decreasing life standards , one of the most important thing is that there is traffic and people do not want to use their cars actually because it. They face it everday and this makes them angry, also this makes people life standard worse too. If people used buses, there would not be traffic but people feel mandotory due to lack of buses.
Thus, goverment should find new ways of transportation because of many cruial effects of people life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rivate car. Therefore, I prefer bus but i wait the empty bus for a twenty minutes...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... pollution and decreasing life standards , one of the most important thing is that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r cars actually because it. They face it everday and this makes them angry, also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97077922078 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71624969018 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542207792208 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.574567624 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231651730625 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751679572107 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137973974076 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135781176051 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179361817109 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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