Friendship is not built on money, thus I do not consider that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship.Meanwhile, it is just because who you are that determine this issue. Because the fridens you make could represent the personality of oneself. To me I'd like to help my friends with money when they need it in emergency. I will address my views as follows.
To begin with, the friend asks you to lend some money because they really need it from you, instead of the others. As fridens I'd like to lend them, because they need the money. More important, this will increase the friendship of mine.When I was in high school, one of my friends could not afford the tuition fee because his father was badly ill.His family was not very rich. He was so shy that he could not open his mouth to borrow money from me even if he really wanted to do so. Thus after I recognizing the situation he was in, I lended him 100 yuan but it was not enough. So later I seized the time he was absent after calss, I called all of my calssmates the on rasing money for him. To our happiness, the money we raised could sovle his emergency. He was very grateful to me, but I told him, it was the effort of the whole classmates. Years later when we came together, he was also tahnkful to all of us.
In addtion, lending money to friends is just the chance to evaluate the friendship.Admittedly, I just want to help wiht my friends as I know there must be the time for me to asking for favor. Once I lended money to one of my friends at work.His banking account was locked while he need cash to go to hospital. Then he paid the money back in time with lots of thanks. After a long while I almost forgot this business, I was in a big trouble at the working project, he did not hesitate to do me the faovor to complish the work ahead of the dealine. Form that time I knew,most of the friends I made were kind hearted, so we would help each other to our best.
Finally, some one could say that how can you deal with the problem if the friend of yours ask you for a large sum of money. So this is the time for your wisdom to show up. Firstly, my friend would not borrow much money as we knew each others that this is the individual business, so we would not bother the friends. Secondly, I would suggest him to make brainstorming, no matter aksing for more friends with small sum of money or bankloan, these are all feasible ways.
In all, as my friends, I'd like to lend money if they ask.More important, I would help them to figure out the solution instead of only the money, because somtimes the money is not affodable. This defined the friendship of mine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26732673267 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48439024367 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455445544554 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2962528413 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7916666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0416666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176619751218 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059786276479 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679348594401 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126800036588 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063827150358 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.